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Sister Sister 017 NEW by CrystalCircle Sister Sister 017 NEW by CrystalCircle
Guess who's back!

so after re-doing the plot, I had to re-do this page. I made Rare a little more dark and I also brought out his first ability...reanimating carcasses to spy for him....yeah, Rare's a gruesome fellow ._.

so, what do you think? Do you like the new SS? Tell me in a critique will help me improve future pages!

Want to see the old page? [link]

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Previous: [link]

First: [link]

Updated here as well: [link]

Annnnd.....all the innocence officially dies on this page 0-0

First mentioning of Rare, a rather gruesome, evil character!

WARNING...this comic includes violence, blood, language...and epic dragon fighting action, please read at own risk!

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The rush this page gives me is amazing! It feels like such a critical moment in the plot. It leaves the reader in mystery as to who this 'Rare' person is and why must the cloud dragon's plan to escape flawed?

One automatically assumes that this Rare person is evil, by the evil red glow and the fear of the Fire Fury. One thinks," Why is that big god seemingly AFRAID of this guy? ... Maybe we should be too,". In this sense, it leaves the reader DYING for more. It will make them grovel for information.

For me, personally, I look at rare and think,". . . . Ravens?. . . what, is he the god of death or something?". In some cultures ravens are messengers from death to carry souls to the underworld.... little fun fact to go along with this. :3
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Critique by TheProhecyofstars Dec 27, 2012, 12:42:07 AM
The shading and drawing is really cool, even the blue bedy thingy. white dots as stars are really cool! and detailed dragon wings, really cool XD plus stripes and colours, to awesome XD Even showing the body of the white dragony thing is cool! Even the writing, red cool writing! The white dragon is small to the big dragon in panel 3. (I think)

So many shading even in the dream and not dream XD
Hawk or raven that wakes him up, sounds like a raven, Flame thingy is really cool on that white or red dragon thing that talks to him.
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Grasschamp Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this page is far superior to the original. It's much darker and makes it look like a legitimate comic page, where certain things/characters fly out of the boxes.

If you keep going like this, you comic will fly through the roof!
CrystalCircle Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much! ^^
Mistovermoon Dec 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Those birds are seriously awesome.
I'm glad you started this comic up again!! :D
CrystalCircle Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! I'm glad too! ^^
CooroJaden Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG! The ravens look so badass!! :O
CrystalCircle Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! ^^
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