Guess who's back!
so after re-doing the plot, I had to re-do this page. I made Rare a little more dark and I also brought out his first ability...reanimating carcasses to spy for him....yeah, Rare's a gruesome fellow ._.
so, what do you think? Do you like the new SS? Tell me in a critique please....it will help me improve future pages!
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[link]Annnnd.....all the innocence officially dies on this page 0-0
First mentioning of Rare, a rather gruesome, evil character!
WARNING...this comic includes violence, blood, language...and epic dragon fighting action, please read at own risk!

So many shading even in the dream and not dream XD
Hawk or raven that wakes him up, sounds like a raven, Flame thingy is really cool on that white or red dragon thing that talks to him.
One automatically assumes that this Rare person is evil, by the evil red glow and the fear of the Fire Fury. One thinks," Why is that big god seemingly AFRAID of this guy? ... Maybe we should be too,". In this sense, it leaves the reader DYING for more. It will make them grovel for information.
For me, personally, I look at rare and think,". . . . Ravens?. . . what, is he the god of death or something?". In some cultures ravens are messengers from death to carry souls to the underworld.... little fun fact to go along with this. :3
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